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To believe a Lie by ~xCher:iconxCher:



She tries so hard to believe him
As he softly whispers in her ear
"You're all I've ever wanted,
Let's just get out of here."

She lets him pull her to his car
Doesn't know what to say
No matter what she'll do
She knows he'll get his way

The sweet promises he makes
The jump she never dared to take
She will believe his beautiful lie
Denies the truth of her mistake

She tries so hard to believe him
As he slowely takes off her clothes
How far his lies will take her
No one will ever know
©2009 ~xCher
:iconxcher:

Author's Comments

Just wrote this. Will edit later.
I'm sorry if I made any mistakes and for it being unedited, but I don't have the time to edit it right away and just needed to put it somewhere.

I think I'm freaking out.
-which has nothing to do with this text btw-

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:iconbloodren-razorcut:
I like it but it's hard to say why with out afending some one
:iconmsgemmadoyle:
:D:D again hon, im starting to belive ur my fav. poet seriously.. i love it :D

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:iconxcher:
Thanks =D
You can say whatever you want to, really =]
:iconxcher:
Awh, thanks!! :hug:
But really, you're WAAAAY too generous =D
:iconmsgemmadoyle:
no im not.. im just waaaaayyy too honest :P

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